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[ Lightning bolts in my head ]

Lightning bolts in my head
butterflies in my stomach
something stuck in my eye
so it looks I might cry
but it's just mother nature
squeezing herself in me
leaking through the pores of my skin
pooling in a salty sea of honesty.

And I'm seperated by continents
afflicted with wars and trauma
whirling, spinning with a !thrust!
>>>through the cosmos>>>
>>>through the stars>>>
>>>through all that was>>>

A stellar beauty unmatched
In a dance that requires no music
Void of all that we require.
Roots will be churned skyward.
The skyscrapers flipped inside out.
Expose all that they (protect)
naked for the sky to see.

-A Chaos Within-

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  • Colossal Squid
    July 15, 2007

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    Wowee!

    You are fucking talented. I prejudged your poetry for it's dash's and greater than symbols but this is absolutely amazing. I like the last stanza best. Speccialy 'Roots will be churned skyward' and that point on. I'm ridiculously jelous.

  • emLeejo
    July 11, 2007

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    frucking awesome me dearie! lol ur a great poet and going through these stupid times that me and you both seem to be going through at the same time (tho different problems ll) but still lol crazy stuff u brad lover! lol luv ya!


  • MissyAnn
    July 11, 2007
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    OMG! i love this the most! you did sooo good your imagery and how could someone not understand after reading this! favortie part
    A stellar beauty unmatched
    In a dance that requires no music
    Void of all that we require.
    Roots will be churned skyward.
    The skyscrapers flipped inside out.
    Expose all that they (protect)
    naked for the sky to see.