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My Verse

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Jenelda

Thoughts running through my head
a book! I’ll be a published Poet
and knowing that my poem will be read
and to my friends I’ll show it.
My Dad will be proud as can be
to know I made the grade
he has faith in me you see
it’s a feeling I’ll never trade.

Jennifer White
Australia

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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    August 18, 2007

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    Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!! Great write!!!!!!!!!


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 14, 2007
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    oh this is beautiful. i can see by your words that not that you need approval but it would be a very special gift to your father and friends to be able to have it. it's like a dream come true, something your father told you you could do and now you are showing him that you can welcome addition to the tapestry be well and be blessed


  • intanglio2ring
    August 14, 2007
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    Glad you did well!

    Mine was DQ'd
    Tang


  • tawk gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    Such a wonderful verse so full of wonderful emotions. I too am excited about being published in ap's very first book. It is such a honor for all of us. Great write


  • eternalpoet
    July 14, 2007

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    3 Stars ***

    Hey Jenni *hugs and kisses* Even I am very proud of you. It will be so great to read you in the book, which poem of yours has been selected to be published?... I have the AP book, on which page has your write up been published?

    Wow, it feels so good to have our name in a book, and our write up in a book. It's a dream of every sincere poet to be published .

    All the best for the future.

    Nice write good work, thanks for sharing.

    Take cares and have a nice time. Just keep it up. Your humble little friend. - Vic ( who else? )


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 12, 2007
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    Great One jen...Love it. Thankyou.

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