She's lying on the freeway
with a deathwish a mile wide,
sanity hiding from her eyes
and a void between her fingertips
and the asphalt.
White lines and headlights
pave her very own road to hell
that she's just too damn tired to walk down
[and if you really want to be rid of her so bad
you can throw her in the fucking fire yourself].
She's been listening to the
same cheesy love songs for months,
laughing when her ears bleed
and crying at the smiles she can't help...
She threw out the belladonna
for a bottle labled poison,
and tried not to blink
when her fingers hit the pavement
[apparently you can still reach hell if you crawl]
Author notes
Well it's really not what I meant to write for you babe, but I hope it's ok
IFLY
In a list
A contest entry
- Tell Me The Truth. Did You Ever Love Me? by forbidden-colour.
300 points, ended July 12, 2007, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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She's been listening to the
same cheesy love songs for months,
laughing when her ears bleed
and crying at the smiles she can't help...
ahhmazing
&& belladonna? NIICE
ily babes, alot
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i loved this. it was beautiful.
last liner on this one bby was beeeautiful.
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
=]
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She threw out the belladonna
for a bottle labled poison,
Wowie
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"[apparently you can still reach hell if you crawl]"
Fucking hell babe!
Mazing.
[=
Love you!
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I think,
When I read the lines :
[and if you really want to be rid of her so bad
you can throw her in the fucking fire yourself].
Made my jaw literally drop.
This is -amazing- I could read this over and over and never get tierd of it. The imagery in this is so -immense- vivid pictures danced through my head, I love it.
Just.. wow :]
&& Good Luck in the contest!!
KetFace - Magic xX
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^_^ Thanks hun
I really liked those lines myself so I'm glad someone else did too
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