I awakened to
the sound of rain
puttering through
the treetops
I awakened to
the bright blessed light
shimmering gold
upon the dew
I awakened to
the sound of life
whispering all
around me
I awakened to
the sound of you
forever
Thank you Mother Earth.
Please tell me what you think
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This is a catchy piece, I like the repetitiveness it gives each stanza emphasis on the subject at hand. Thanks for sharing UNT.
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i wish my days began as beautifully as yours. well done and best of luck in the contest
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The topic is one that immediately brings an image to mind; one that is as reassuring as a heartbeat. The following stanzas are crystal clear and very beautiful.
The last sentence is unnecessary, and it destroys the simplicity of the write. This is the best poem I have read from you.
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