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Days of sadness

In the nights
masked by light
Where the cold
is strong
and the rain
is salty tears
that the world
cries
the sun is out
the day seems good
but in all truth
it's a day of sadness
a day when nothing seems right

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  • Antebellum
    May 6, 2009

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    this is amazing. girr so jealous. your 4 years younger than me and i like this better than my writing.


  • Miss Insolence
    July 12, 2007
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    Wow! This poem is one of those that just goes WHAM! Really strong and powerful, absolutely amazing.


  • nannalishious
    July 12, 2007
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    Good Job

    You spoke the truth, and got to the point. And it didn't bore me either!!! Overall, well done!