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Growth

Out of our  heart
the words of poetry grow,
like flowers in sunshine
taking a life of their own.
Striving higher
toward the sun
to bring colors to your world.

 

debilynn 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    August 18, 2007

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    Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!! Loved this one!!!!!!!

  • jacbgd2 gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!! Loved this one!!!!!!!


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 14, 2007

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    wonderful words from the heart, almost melodic to the ears great addition to the tapestry. be well and be blessed


  • intanglio2ring
    August 14, 2007
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    Glad you did well!

    Mine was DQ'd
    Tang


  • tawk gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    What a beautiful verse. I think we as poets can all relate. What wonderful imagery and emotions


  • Lady Altheia
    July 28, 2007

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    Hoodwinked

    This is great. I like how you described the poetry. It only gets better the more we write. You been hoodwinked by a poetic bandit.


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    July 26, 2007

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    HOODWINKED !!!

    This is a beautiful verse full of energy and light. You express yourself so well my Bandit friend. Enjoy your Hoodwink today.

    Dennis

  • tawk gold member
    July 26, 2007
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    HOOD-WINKED!

    I love this verse. I too write from the heart. I feel that is what makes a true poet. Such a beautiful verse. Such wonderful imagery and emotion within

    You have just been Hood-Winked


  • Whisper Trinity
    July 26, 2007

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    Hood Winked!

    This is very heartwarming. I like the message you are sending with this verse. Good luck in your contest hun. I'm sorry about your mother I hope it gets better with time. Much Love! Whisper Trinity


  • sublimewriter
    July 12, 2007
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    a sun to our world, indeed. your words are tender and cheerful


  • paullallady silver member
    July 12, 2007
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    I really like this. It is sweet and tender and has good rythm and flow. good luck in the contest.


  • soulfultia gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    This was beautiful Debi! Always penning a smile with your words ~Tia

  • goalsv
    July 11, 2007
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    Beautiful poem here. Great discription of poetry and poets.


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 11, 2007
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    Beautiful and thanks so much


  • Tamera
    July 11, 2007
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    I love this, we do write from the heart and strive ever higher. How beautifully put.


  • StarEyes
    July 11, 2007

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    What a great job you did on this one my friend!! I love it! This leaves me with a feeling of warmth and happiness. Thanks for sharing this! Best of luck to you in this contest my friend.

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