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Is it true?

As I sit here
I wonder................

Did I do anything wrong
did I not do something
have this feeling
that you are slipping away

I could be wrong
was once (J/K)

I don't know (my fav. line)
maybe it's just me
and nothing is wrong
but I just have this feeling

Have I lost you
are you gone
did I scare you
or am I wrong

Let me know
if you're leaving
so I can prepare for the worst

~Tisha~

Author notes

Just feeling not right.
Written August 24th, 2003

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  • Justmegary
    August 25, 2003
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    Hon, Communicate!!! I pray that you are wrong. But we do too much playing the "What if?" game with ourselves. One day One step at a time is best hon.... I wish you Perfect Peace

    BB

    Gary


  • TwiztedAndAlone
    August 25, 2003
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    Oh my gosh...I've been feeling this exact way lately..I'm so scared that the person I'm closest with it going to leave me because I'm doing something wrong..But I don't know what that 'wrong' thing is yet.. Cheer up sweety! I love ya!
    Great write by the way



    twizted bizkit


  • Queen Chiquita
    August 25, 2003
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    Ah... Psychic.. hah well. I hope yoou're wrong. I loved this write. Very interesting and it kept my intrest till the very end (not that all your writing doesn't) Great wrote. Keep it up.

    *~*Queefie*~*


  • ocmack
    August 24, 2003
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    Ahhhhh the intuition of a woman. Hmmmmmmmm I hope perhaps you're wrong on this one Lady Raven. I liked the write, very interesting what your mind seems to be working on. A very nice write, but very disturbing at the same time. Hopefully whoever you're writing about will settle and calm your concerns.