enraged inside i swear i could kill everyone around me
im proud though 'cause even though im pissed as fuck, today a tear you wont see
damn i hate men, and yes all the motherfucking men of the world
i want to go back and change my sex because im so sick and tired of being a girl
men dont have hearts, i question if they even have souls
i think they're worthless bodies made of shit whose minds are made of holes
fuck everything with a dick, i hope they catch a disease and die
im proud though 'cause even though im broken, today you wont see me cry
i dare a man to fuck with me; watch his stupid ass get blasted
ive been though enough, there's nothing left, my patience is outlasted
its sad because i know my mind isnt healthy, its simply full of hate
but too bad is someone wants to help me now because its way too goddamn late
i cant wait to get out of this place because i dont want to go to jail
i know that if i had a weapon on me id bust in their heads like a hammer to a nail
i could throw up im so disgusted but im not going to waste my energy
im proud though 'cause even though im fucked up as hell, my eyes are dry as can be
i chew on this ice and pretend its some dude, crushing his very last cell
my mouth is so numb but i like it that way; it wants to frown but you really cant tell
i would love to see them bleed, begging for just a little mercy
maybe then they would know how us women felt all these years, ignored to our very last plea
Author notes
its a bit on the aggresive side, but it gets the point across. kids cover your eyes!
A contest entry
- You break my heart into a thousand pieces and you say it's because I deserve better by Lie 2 Me Once Again.
625 points, ended July 11, 2007, 11 entries
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I feel a little bit bad about my flippant response to your poem, yesterday. Hey but I did give you three applause. Writing is a great way to deal with the feelings of the self. Keep it up!
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Very angry! I’m a misanthrope but not a misogynist, what do you call it when a woman hates men? That is a question I have yet to ponder but then now it is there, and I must. Men do have drives and they do think with them but I am afraid that isn’t always true. Sometimes they loose interest in their drives and they begin to think about the nature of existence. Some son of a bitch is always trying to sell them viagra; very confusing. I say,f*%k mankind but what I am really saying is, “go f*%k yourself.” When I say this I am f*%king myself and this has a lot of power, at this point I know I am nothing but everything at the same time, it’s a profound revelation. You really got me to respond, isn’t that worth something?
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