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Fill Me

Fill me

Fill the space in my mind
With words of lust and passion
Fill the space in my heart
With love unequaled
Fill the space between my legs
With fingers probing deep

Cuff my hands above my head
Spread my legs apart
Rip my panty with your teeth
Toss it firmly aside
Bind my body to the bed
This canvas is yours tonight

Take my body, make it yours
Kiss me long and hard
Bite my neck, scratch my flesh
Make me buck and writhe
I need to feel our naked bodies
Unceremoniously intertwined

Thrust the strap-on deep within
Our bodies beat as one
Breathing becomes short and shallow
Clits throb with climatic release
I feel you drip against my slit
Tis your name my lips scream


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  • Phed
    October 23, 2007
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    LOL :evil: need I say more?


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    August 26, 2007
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    STUNNING WRITING!!!

    STUNNING MY SISTER. I LOVE THIS. WONDERFUL AND BRILLIANT PIECE OF WRITING HERE. YOU HAVEN'T LOST YOUR TOUCH ANG. THE IMAGERY IS OUTSTANDING IN THIS. THE FLOW AND THE PASSION IS HOT AND STEAMING. WELL DONE MY SISTER.

    FANTASTIC WRITING
    TAKE CARE ANG
    WAYNE
    xx


    • -Ang-
      August 27, 2007
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      thank you my dearest Brother your comments are always looked forward to.



      ang


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 24, 2007
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    DAMN, THIS MADE ME HARD & HORNY!

    I'm DELIGHTED that I stopped by to see if you had any new EROTIC PIECES as I'm a nughty boy who loves them so! And as I SIMPLY ADORE and worship a women with a strap-on as you know - perhaps one of the two of you will let me join the party! Keep them coming, Baby!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


    • -Ang-
      July 26, 2007
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      thank you Earl. I do so appreciate and look forward to your comments. i have been slack of late and not been able to write much. but hopefully my muse shall return from wherever she is hiding.... (she is a fragile little soul)

      ang


  • slavelisa
    July 14, 2007

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    still haven't lost ur touch

    Will do that for you any time you want right down to the finest detail

    Seriously well written Im now going for a coooollllld bath now

    glad ur writing again

    Lips


    • -Ang-
      July 14, 2007
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      thanks captain, your comments are always looked forward to... and as you know i do so enjoy writing erotica

      it also helps when my muse does not get scared away, she is so fickle!!!! LOL

      ang


  • poorme
    July 13, 2007
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    Wow,pretty hot wrire,I really like this


    • -Ang-
      July 14, 2007
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      thanks for stopping by and reading this shackhoe, its greatly appreciated - i do so enjoy writing erotica.

      ang


      • poorme
        July 17, 2007
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        Any suggestions that would make mine any better? I love your stuff,it's really good

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