If falling in love is like an aeroplane,
I would jump a thousand times.
To soar through the air and clouds again,
to land captivated in your eyes.
Just to lie beneath the stars,
Us both drifting to sleep,
and feel complete, just as we are,
echoes of soft words so sweet.
If falling in love is like a cold pool,
to plunge in would be my desire.
I would bask in your love so cool,
as you set my heart on fire.
If falling in love would bring about peace,
Cupids arrows would fly in the air.
If everyone loved like you and me,
it would end crying, and bring out more care.
Author notes
5) if none of the prompts interests you just write a great love poem
Parts based on If everyone cared by Nickleback
A contest entry
- ARE YOU IN LOVE ???....then come on in !!! by Mrs D.
325 points, ended July 25, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nice poem.....
"If falling in love is like an aeroplane,
I would jump a thousand times."
"If falling in love is like a cold pool,
to plunge in would be my desire."
really powerful lines....shows what u would go through for ur love
thanx for entering my contest -
great write
this is a great inspiring write. you bring forth some powerful emotions of love. thanks for allowing me to read and comment on your work.
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