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rocky playdough days





mountainous memories;

molding me, time
deposited salt

on crevassed cheeks.








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  • Hadji Murad
    July 11, 2007

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    This is brilliantly amazing. The metaphor is profound, the words are deep and shimmer with such depth and brilliance.