Puppydog
Dreams, faith and hope from the heart
All that is beautiful, the things from which we never wish to part
Flow smoothly in words of many phrases and forms
Bringing souls safely through terrible storms
Warming hearts with love and joy
Sharing all that is cherished with every girl and boy
Author notes
We share here all that we have experienced hoping that happiness and warmth will be brought to all who may read
A contest entry
- Add a verse. for Tapestry of poets world record attempt by Janice M Pickett.
360 points, ended August 17, 2007, 144 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!! Very good!!!!!!
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HELLO JACBGD2
Thanks so much, it sure is so wonderful to be included in this book.
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Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!! Very good!!!!!!
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Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!! Very good!!!!!!
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my dearest friend, you always write with beauty and grace from your heart and this was a wonderful addition to out tapestry
be well and be blessed
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HELLO LADYOF AVALON
Thank ever so much
I do try my best to just let my heart do my writing. What one feels is always true and best way to express one self.
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Glad you did well!
Mine was DQ'd
Tang
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I could so relate, we all write from life's experiences whether they be good or bad. We all try to change the world with our words and help others. Great write
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HELLO TAWK
Thanks ever so much for reading, it means so much I have always tried my best to let my heart stay open and be true.
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Outstanding.
There is a simplicity and grace about this poem that is to be applauded. This has a great flow and inspirational message. Sometimes you can say so much more in a short poem and this poem achieves a lot. A pleasure to read.
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HELLO BETH
Thanks so very much for reading I have always tried my best to keep my heart open and true. To just express what one feels makes for the most sincere and sweet poems.
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wow, how sweet this is, well done
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HELLO SWEET SILENT TALKER
Thank you ever so much for reading
I know myself this is why I continue to write and to let my thoughts and feelings come out to others.
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Lovely Verse
Hello Kevin. The verse you have added to the contest is quite lovely. Delightful in imagery and so heartfelt. Thank you for sharing. Take care dear friend. Hugs to you. Sandy
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HELLO SANDY
Thanks ever so much for reading my verse here You know of course that this is how I write, I just let it all come out with the hope that in some small way what I am feeling or thinking will just maybe help another who reads.
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Magnifico! I couldn't have said it any better. dreams are wonderful!
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HELLO LONESOMEDOVE
Thank you so very much for reading this one today! I sincerely believe that poetry is our universal language for this big world of ours.
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So true
I have loved this sight from day one and in hope of helping those I can and learning from others in hope to help myself this is an excellent write
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HELLO STORIES UNTOLD
Thank you ever so much for reading today! I know since I came here and found people who give to everyone as much or more than they take I have been blessed in many ways. I truly believe that poetry is the universal language for the world.
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Your words always carry a beam of light, that is why you are such a pleasure to read my pleasure! ~Tia
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HELLO TIA
Thank you so very much for reading this one today I always just let my heart write for me in everyone that I write. My sincerest thoughts and emotions are in each and every one.
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Wonderful verse that SHOULD be shared with all. Easy language that flows smoothly from the lips and an Eternal message that flows softly into the heart!
Bravo!
Marianne
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HELLO MARIANNE
Thanks ever so much for reading this one To me poetry is our opening of our hearts and minds and sharing them with all who will take the time to read and understand them.
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Excellent
This is an excellent verse for a book
It represents what a poetry book should be all about. Words of comfort and joy to share with all readers.
Good luck in the contest with this verse.
Sapphire
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HELLO SAPPHIRE
Thank you so very much for stopping by to read this one Poetry to me is our open hearts and minds speaking to all who will take the time to read them. I know my thoughts and deepest emotions are in each and every poem that I write.
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this is beautiful. it flows so smoothly and lightly. it makes me smile and feel good inside. keep writing! God bless you always
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HELLO DEBILYNN
Thanks ever so much for stopping by to read this today I feel all of us open our hearts and minds and share with all our most precious moments, to me that is what beautiful poetry is all about.
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Compassionate relating in a descriptive voice.Nicely done!
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HELLO SUSEANN
Thanks ever so much for reading my thoughts here, it means a lot my friend.
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Thanks Kevin. Beautiful words. I moves the long lines down a bit so they were not so wide. Still looks great.
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HELLO JANICE
Thanks so very much, I feel that this is the way I write.
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