What about me do you ask,
That drives you crazy?
Well my dear,
It's your eyes,
And how they sparkle,
How they capture all the light,
And then shine,
When you look into mine.
Also Love,
It's your lips,
And how tender they are,
How they are so soft,
I get high,
When your lips touch mine.
Don't Forget Dear,
It's your smile,
How unforgetable it is,
How it looks heaven sent,
How it makes me smile too.
I Must Say Love,
It's your touch,
How great it seems,
How lovely it is,
And it makes me want more.
Shall I Mention Dear,
It's also your hugs,
How comforting they are,
How important it is,
And I won't forget them.
Love,
It's the little things,
How important they are,
How much they mean,
How much you can do,
And it makes me belive you love me.
A contest entry
- Write a poem to be read at my wedding. by tinuelena.
900 points, ended September 23, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well this is for a guy... duh
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Very good poetry.
You write very well! Your poetry speaks of young love,
Uncorrupted love, It's a refreshing type of love! My poetry speaks of old DECREPTED dying loves. When the love's almost over and you are hanging on for dear life! (LIKE A MAN DROWNING) Trying to get that last breath of air! Keep up the good work!
"BOO"
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wow very deeo in the love i like it bunches sweetie
i loves these words the most:
How they are so soft,
I get high,
When your lips touch mine.
soo sweet and a way to get high with out trouble
very nice dear, love lots.. -
Pure awesomeness. I loved it!
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nicely penned
your words flow so gently from your pen as if trying to caress his heart. beautiful write. thanks for sharing it and allowing me to comment on such great write. -
que interesante...
lovely...so very much...great write.
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