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Wishes don't come true

I wish I could see him one more time
I wish I could make just one more day fine
But wishes don't ever come true
But that's what Daddy told me to do
I wish and wish but it's all wrong
I can't bring him back into my arms
Magic doesn't work ever
It always has a trick to fool a lover
Placed him in another place
He's a memory I can't erase.
I don't want it but he's in my dreams
Something's wrong when he's not with me
It's just so wrong to take him away
I can't move on when he's all I think about all day
Daddy says he'll never come back
He's always right but I won't think that.
Every love poem I write
Doesn't take me days and nights
It's all him and only him
I just wish he was here again....

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  • Simsboy
    July 12, 2007

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    wishing is what make human go foward, and most of the time they come true, sometime it can't take forever


  • teengirl16
    July 11, 2007
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    love it. really good. i'll be sure to read more of ur work.