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Twister Passion

You are the massive tornado
And I am the eye of the storm,
We always work together
A funnel cloud together we form
We might make it thunder and lightning
Maybe we'll make the winds blow,
Intentionally drop hail from our clouds
To the innocent earth, way below
Hot air and cold air collide as one
The rain is our tears falling to the ground,
The train sound is us tearin up jack
The destruction is us twirling, dancing round and round
And once the storm has passed
We shall part till the next time around,
Go our seperate ways for a while
Until it's time again to go round and round.

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  • Tarja
    January 29, 2008

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    This had an interesting rhyme scheme. I enjoyed the imagery and the word choice. The poem was very well written and so intense. Thank you for entering and good luck.