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Write Words In The Ink Of Memories

Reach within a world of waiting watchers,
Draw out pain from their very souls.
Trace the words I spoke to you in the air above my bed,
And let go.

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  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    Lovely. I especially like, "the words I spoke to you in the air above my bed". This moves along the mind lightly, but lingers on the heart heavily. --I could almost see the pain being drawn out as if my a snake-charmer's fingers. Nicely done!