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Washed Away

Current juggle of emotions

          Countless hours of sentiment

Bottled away; drift to sea

          Wish to be understood

Swallowed up by darkness

           blackened waters hide; existence

 failed

 

Forever lost in mystery

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Prompt: Mainstream Madness

30 Words

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 12, 2007

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    Good write here

    Yes in the eyes of the beholder life in each turn of the page reveals the heartbreak and pain shown upon the faces of those who live it every day


  • kennethlaney
    July 11, 2007

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    Lost of a lover or a questionable friend? Trying to acy as thou you don't care.
    I liked it.
    "BOO"


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    phenomenal imagery, marvelous flow. this definitely evokes emotion. love it.