I am the murderer who slips away. Like cancer I radiate through the infants, the elders, the strong, the weak. The only prejudices I display are absolute. My presence creeps through air with gagging thickness. My caress is squeezing hearts. My accent is cracking bones. My breath decays all around me. I am the blackest veil. The Holocaust. Armenia. Nanjing. Cambodia. Rwanda. I am the bone chugger.
A contest entry
- Another one of those Pic inspired ones by rainyday woman.
475 points, ended July 29, 2007, 11 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Nicely written, its very very powerful. Thanks for entering!
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what is a bone chugger?./...this is not a murderer as a person..but murder in abstact..a disease?..war?..the wrongness of humanity?
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The Bone Chugger
The Bone Chugger is death. The ultimate killer! Death comes in many forms. Not just a man with a knife, gun, or other tool of murder.
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Wicked!
I loved this! The bone chugger, both classic and unique concept, very well penned! Good luck in the contest. -
There is no link as to which picture this pertains to, so I'm not quite sure what to say other than thank you for your entry
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Thank you for entering
Thanks very much for entering my contest too. I do not quite see that it represents the picture, seems more like you entered because the pre-write option was open, even though it was stated not to enter a pre-write. So go ahead and ask why was it open then. It was because that was the only way I could get the contest to accept more then one write from anyone. Again thanks for entering.
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Wow. That's absolutely horrific, I guess this is more of a thought provoking piece and therefore a dark one. Good write.
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This is the darkest?!
This isn't the darkest! Dark and brutal isn't just death and hate. Darkness is ones inner mind! Ones soul that cannot be saved. Insanity, absolute depression, worthlessness, the darkest sins!!! I don't want you just reading my poems if you won't take the time to truly find the meaning. I was hoping you were a person who loves an intricate read not simplicity!! -
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That's what I said, the thought provoking side of this CREATES the darkness. If you don't like the way I comment on your pieces then feel free to remove them from the contest
I didn't DQ you, that must mean something to you.
Bandaid.
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very interesting.. I especially like the list at the end.. reminded me a lot of O.D.H.G.A.B.F.E.
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