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Another Dream

Another dream of that perfect place,
Another dream of your perfect face.
Another dream full of your charm,
Another dream of laying in your arms.
Another dream where i long to be,
Another dream that i hate to leave,
Returning to reality
Where i mean nothing to you
But you mean everything to me.

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  • TimeAfterTime
    July 16, 2007

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    Oww

    This poem was so good it brought me tears when you wrote the end , it was such a twist of emotion , "Where I mean nothing to you , But you mean everything to me" , great poem

    • DragonAngel
      July 21, 2007
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      Thankyou so much, i really appreciate your comments, and thanks for adding me as a favorite