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Ocean Storm

The wind laughed like a lunatic
Its hands stirred up the ocean
The thunder roared, a great beast
The shore swept in emotion
The tears of heaven
Rained down upon the land
And the hail of hell
Crashed down upon the sand
As the trees bent forward
The salty air wailing
And lightning's sword
The waves wildly flailing
Sliced through the sky
As the storm passed by

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    Wow what intense visuals!! I could really feel and hear the wind, hail and rain. Well done. Thank you so much for entering and good luck.

    Jeannie