When I say I love you,
I mean for eternity.
We have a connection,
our souls need each other.
Ready to stand at your side,
through thick and thin.
Ready to walk the road of life
for the rest of our lives.
On the last day,
we'll be guardian angels.
Author notes
My prompt : come what may, I will love you untill my dying day
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/20/50 quickie number 3 by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie Prewrites - Turn Your Silver Into Gold by CitrineSunrise.
450 points, ended July 16, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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100th Hoodwink
This is a beautiful love poem, so sweet and permanent in scope. Well written, thoughtful work!
You are a victim of our 100th Hoodwink Celebration, we appreciate all you do here at AllPoetry and your contributions help make AP an even better Poetic community, Thank You!
Dennis
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Congrates on the silver, what a message here..Great penning, thanks for sharing..and keep this up..
-Timothy
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As I am getting married in two weeks this poem struck a chord. What a beautiful thought. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz
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This is such a gorgeous write, we all hope for love just like this with promises from the heart, I am glad you have found this in your own life. Grand write
Karen
P.S Thanks for all the Hood Wink comments you left on my work, gave me a great smile
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I love this write Auntie. You have written so many emotions in this piece it is awesome. Really lovely write keep it up.
You are an inspiration
Never give up
Kate
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Such a beautiful poem about ones love for each other. What a wonderful journey you have laid out in life. Just beautiful and so full of wonderful emotions
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a love that im sure many feel, or wish to have described perfectly within this poem.
i know that i wish to have a moment like this.
you used wonderful descriptive words that were from the heart and soul and created a wonderful poem using them
very well written well done
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lol it didnt give my applause
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I like this poem a lot, especially the way it is broken up, the last two lines add a lot of emphasis, good work, and good luck in the contest!
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OMG YAY AT LAST YOUR PROMPT IS
prompt: come what may, I will love you untill my dying day
yes its from the song come what may in moulin rouge
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