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Twisting, Thunderous
Winds whipping all around
Intense is the eye of the storm,
So strong
Tornados twirling
Erecting everything in its sight
Releasing recklessly
Sequence settles, till next time
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Author notes
living in england i have only seen a few very small tornados but i seen big ones on tv...
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- Midst of the Storm-Contest by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended July 14, 2007, 11 entries
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Cool acrostic with some clever alliteration! Love the twister picture. Very well done. Thanks so much for entering and good luck.
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fanx jeannie sis
the pix i found on google lol xxx cheeky xxx
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I love the form and content of your Acrostic. This is great. You have captured the feeling of a Twister so well
Good luck
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fanx Aunt Theresa we have had a few wot we call bad ova here that have damages houses and fings but nuffink on the scale of yours ..i must admit tho they do make interesting films xxx cheeky xxx
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wery nice acrostic cheeky, I have been several tornadoes, the one in 1957 destoryed our house, the one last yr destroyed our trailer. you did good the tornado can destroy everything it touches. good luck int he contest
your Master 4 ever
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fanx u Master wen we live in eastbourne we watch one it came along the coast n lifted boats that was on the beach up in the air n crashin back down it was kinda kool to watch but i fink a big one wud scare me for sure xxx 4eva yours cheeky xxx
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