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The missing treasure

Party clothes still on,
heels tapping the dark road,
The twosome paused at the glitter behind the bush.
Carefully peeping, they raised a crystal tooth.
Their confusion escalated on hearing
"It is mine" from a booming voice
his green face appearing and vanishing
as he held out his hand with no arm.
Shaking arms returned it's denture
and their legs scurried till they reached home.

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  • patsoldcat
    July 11, 2007

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    good

    liked the hand with no arm

    almost frightening but the denture thing was just to funny, for how can you be scarry when you just droped your teeth.
    nice.


  • Tattboyspet
    July 11, 2007
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    hmmm ... interesting ... well done