Ink scattered acrossed a page
A Burning Sage
Time ticking away
Where I lay
A writer trapped in a cage
An unwritten page
time doesnt stop
it keeps going nonstop
A broken brush
Made by a hurried rush
*may in future extend
Author notes
Just something I came up with laying in bed
Please tell me what you think
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lol cute though I wish it were longer.. coz it has a very good rhyme .. an eerie atmosphere of suspense..
if you could please add more to it .. it'd be great and incase you do .. let me know
keep on writing, and writing in bed always or usually ends with a good result
Nooni
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since you asked very nicely I extended 4 lines
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Makes you think
This is quite pretty, Miss Moira. I like it because it makes me see it.
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