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Violet

The color at the end of a rainbow
It is a wonderful sight to see
Just to see it and to know
How beautiful Violet can be

It's the color of a flower
Just sitting in the sun
Or in a new spring shower
Oh, what lovely fun

You can see it in a diner
On an eggplant or a grape
There is nothing finer
Than a purple, purple drape

Violet is a beautiful color
It represents happiness and fun
There is no color other
Violet is the prettiest one

Author notes

i kno it sux lol

A contest entry

i know its stupid and childish but whaddya think? lol

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  • Whispered Secrets
    July 22, 2007

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    It represents happiness and fun
    Violet is the prettiest one

    I liked those two lines but I didn't like 'there is no color other' because it's a bit confusing. Still, it's a well thought out poem seeing how violet is really pretty and I think the background adds to your views on the color seeing as it's a violet color. [That made me feel really stupid typing that]

    I think violet is a pretty color. some think it's very serious and very sad but I like how you've changed its whole meaning.

    Good write.

    MISS CATASTROPHE
    -----Lovely Photographs


  • jennylynn
    July 14, 2007
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    Very good


  • Candy6
    July 12, 2007
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    Very lovely

    I really like violets.


  • holly9
    July 11, 2007
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    A beautiful poem. I like violets!