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peace

I found some peace today -
it blew across my skin
with the dust,
stirred by the morning breeze

and I walked from mottled shadows
into clear light
and saw grace shining
on my skin.

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  • cup-a-joe silver member
    November 23, 2007
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    Nice

    Nice short form poem. I like it.
    Joe