Come hither me love
this night, I count stars brilliant
woven to its’ veil
the moonlight spills stardust dreams
serenade to summer’s breeze.
as tender whispers
fall gentle from wanton lips
emotions arise,
and my heart recedes respite
waiting once again, her bliss.
My Tanka Poetry
Double Tanka
In a list
A contest entry
- IT'S TANKA FORM LOVE AFFAIR....by Rose Tattoo by Sweet Sorrow.
2200 points, ended July 14, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Did You Win A Gold Trophy? by Nam.
525 points, ended October 19, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I'm not really into this type of poetry, the "Tanka" form, and other such forms similar to it. Cinquain's, and and haiku's I'm fine with, but, the rest bore me. Sometimes I even like Diamante's but even those get boring after awhile.
This is the first Tanka that didn't bore me. I felt that was worth an HM.
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thanks Nams
means alot to me....
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Emotions flow throughout your double tanka, and I like the use of the classical style of language throughout.
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wonderful images and the flow of each lines were smooth. Thank you for entering my contest
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This is gorgeous, you penned this form with words that would swoon anyone off their feet,thank you for sharing as always good luck,MM
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Gorgeous Mal~~~Even with the old style language...definitely beautiful form....well done....
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On hold with baited breath held in antisapation.
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lol...
you're to funny... ok you can read it now that it has been written..
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