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Design for life (haiku)

rigid lettering
vivid white on black marble
a design for life

A contest entry

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 23, 2007
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    very good choice of words,nice vision in the form..good luck in this contest, MM


  • Melodies
    July 11, 2007

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    Very smart lines that capture the art of the tombstone. Good job, poet!


  • Mr C
    July 11, 2007
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    Very good!

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