So deep in feelings as dark blue ocean,
so wide as a blue window on the world.
Spirit and soul, to an occult in motion
so deep in feelings as dark blue ocean;
pastiche of life, joy to elegiac devotion;
songs finding melodies, spirit unfurled.
So deep in feelings as dark blue ocean,
so wide as a blue window on the world.
Words of meanings beyond my reach
bringing beauty within my grasp,
with gentle kindness to lead, teach;
words of meanings beyond my reach.
Compassion and care as due to each
piercing mind, art and wisdom clasp
words of meanings beyond my reach,
bringing beauty within my grasp.
In a list
A contest entry
- Write A Triolet by 2lullabyhaven.
540 points, ended August 15, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Triolets! Come in! by DeadlyTurnip.
800 points, ended August 31, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a really pretty poem. Thank you for entering.
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Lovely poem, thanks for entering it into my contest. lol
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intersting. triolet....i like it. could not pull it off this nicely, im sure. good luck in the contest. enjoyed the read.
blu
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Such a beautiful and flawless poem...This is one of my favorite forms...You have composed it beautifully...
Another wonderful creation....
Lynda
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