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[ Words that have been supressed ]

Words that have been supressed
for far to long
are released when pen touches paper
in the form
of jagged cursive writing
they are not always beautiful
and they are not always metaphoracle
but they will forever be
known as the poetry of me

A contest entry

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  • GhostOfARose-
    October 2, 2007
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    Awesome write

    Been a while eh, but this was really good. Flow was perfect, orthography was epic and pictorial evidence infinite.
    (orthography = vocab lol... i learnt that word today. you're the first person i've used it on xP Feel special xD )
    In Love And Light,
    Kenaz.


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!!


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!!


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 14, 2007

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    wonderful addition to the tapestry, yes it is a poets release to write the words or mind and heart upon the pages on AP. be well and be blessed


  • intanglio2ring
    August 14, 2007
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    Glad you did well!

    Mine was DQ'd
    Tang


  • tawk gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    I can so relate, what flows on the paper is what I follow. I write from the heart. Wonderful imagery and emotion


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 11, 2007
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    Great Verse. Thanks Honey.

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