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/\/\ Intoxicated Smile /\/\



Drinking makes me happy.
Helps me forget the past.
Always brings a smile,
Although I know it won’t last.


The smile I miss most,
Is so very hard to find.
It comes out when I drink,
How come I be so blind?


I want another glass,
To help ease the pain.
I need to keep these feelings.
I’m sick of life’s stupid games.


Everything’s a test,
That I wish to avoid.
Keeps me at my worst.
Always pissed off and annoyed.


I feel I need to cry,
To let the feelings go.
Somehow to show a friend.
I need someone to know.


I’m scared to open up,
To accept this effing shit.
But NO! I can’t! I won’t!
I just CAN’T deal with it!


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well another drinking night... i started writting

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  • omgtitsmcgee
    August 2
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    this describes me <


  • angelsslayer
    July 25, 2007
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    The rhyming was awesome, and i loved how each verse linked in with another.

    • hopelessly-broken
      July 25, 2007
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      thank you so much! i am glad you liked this one
      this one ment alot to me, tis pretty person (so are the rest of my poems really lol)

      take care, love HB
      xoxoxox


  • Piper77
    July 17, 2007

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    Wow! I loved the rhyming, and the meaning! This was really good. Keep it up!

    *snap*

    • hopelessly-broken
      July 18, 2007
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      aw thank hun... im glad you liked it. its another drunken poem, lol

      talk soon, much love
      love HB
      xoxoxoxoxoxoxox

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