Tears swell with anger and rage.
I swear I will escape from this cage!
The cage that keeps my smile fake.
And makes me lay, forever awake.
Cage of uncertanty, anger, unease.
Hear my cries, someone PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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i dunno... call me crazy if you will. it made sence when i was writting it
Please tell me what you think
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depth achived here powerful, and call crazy nope, we all reach at some stage, me im older alot older and have reach out once, in the past, my scars live with me forever. We all view life with our feelings, the more we are hurt the more we wish it to go away.
In the end who is hurting who the lines become blurred, till only one person is left.
That is how I see life now, I can only say its a path I wish upon no one, You are young and have a chance but Im not gona give advice, not my right to do so, anyway your poem rocked, it made me think of my past.
Keep on writing creating and living.
Ps dellete the comment if you want sometimes I do go on.
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It makes sense.
I love love love love love this. I can relate to it so deeply. You and me, we have a lot in common. Anyways great write! And keep it up!
<3BD9
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we do have alot in commen dont we? well im glad you loved it
i didnt like it too much. but im glad i rote it.
take care sis! and rememebr i am always here for you
love HB
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Deep poem. A nice change in style as well with the 2 line verse.. Good.
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thanks.... yeah i tend to change a bit like that, which is good in a way, so they dont all sound totally the same
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Great work!!!!
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thank you
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It makes sense to me Once again, I hope you are ok, and never forget you are special xxxx
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<> thanks you AP Mum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loooovvveee yyyoooouuuuu, i rote this one a while ago, but i left it in my notebook. and i found it last night n im like 'hmm its not too bad' so i posted it.. but im fine
thanks heaps
love HB
xoxoxoxoxoxox
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