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Goemetrical Confusion

The square on the hypotenuse
Is equal to the sum of
and so on ad infinitum.
Time square must be a new nova brilliance
One of those opposites of black holes
Where all is lost in deep uncomprehending, depression.
Here in my time square will be all the multiples
Of historical events,
Lost, but not forgotten souls.
Loved ones beaming from the pages of mind`s memory
And, those dearly beloved faces only known from
Faded sepia photograps of great-grandmas,mothers,aunts
And more recent sisters, wives and nieces.
Utopia in five dimensions.
Hail the great being.

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Option 5 please. Just to get the ball rolling

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  • individuality gold member
    April 26

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    i have a poem about this topic called python agoris' theorem lol playing with math in poetry and another with god doing a test pl;us other worldy sci fi poems using ath - a body of thought is one


  • suseann
    July 11, 2007

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    Time warps in threaded diminsions of it's own glistening beauty.Deep thoughts in this poetic verse.
    Shines in a dazzling light all of it's own poet.


  • rawrbby
    July 11, 2007

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    Lost, but not forgotten souls.
    Loved ones beaming from the pages of mind`s memory

    those were my favorite two lines. this poem was short, sweet and to the point. you did a lovely job. thanks for entering