The square on the hypotenuse
Is equal to the sum of
and so on ad infinitum.
Time square must be a new nova brilliance
One of those opposites of black holes
Where all is lost in deep uncomprehending, depression.
Here in my time square will be all the multiples
Of historical events,
Lost, but not forgotten souls.
Loved ones beaming from the pages of mind`s memory
And, those dearly beloved faces only known from
Faded sepia photograps of great-grandmas,mothers,aunts
And more recent sisters, wives and nieces.
Utopia in five dimensions.
Hail the great being.
Author notes
Option 5 please. Just to get the ball rolling
A contest entry
- [time square can't shine as bright as you] by rawrbby.
765 points, ended July 24, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i have a poem about this topic called python agoris' theorem lol playing with math in poetry and another with god doing a test pl;us other worldy sci fi poems using ath - a body of thought is one
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Time warps in threaded diminsions of it's own glistening beauty.Deep thoughts in this poetic verse.
Shines in a dazzling light all of it's own poet.

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Lost, but not forgotten souls.
Loved ones beaming from the pages of mind`s memory
those were my favorite two lines. this poem was short, sweet and to the point. you did a lovely job. thanks for entering




