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Heaven's Dance

Heaven dances across the sky,
light bestowed in graceful beauty.
Entangling the mind of the watching soul,
consuming all earthly desires.

Sparks fly as the two lights touch,
entangling the mind of the watching soul.
The magnetic field holding strong,
as light is bestowed in graceful beauty.

Consuming all earthly desires,
sparks fly as the two lights touch.
The magnetic field holding strong.
Heaven dances across the sky.


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  • azure85 gold member
    July 12, 2007

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    This is so pretty, a lovely take on the picture.

    Consuming all earthly desires,
    sparks fly as the two lights touch.
    The magnetic field holding strong,
    heaven dances across the sky.

    The dance, the magnetic field and sparks flying, wonderful descriptions in every line.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    This was a beautiful piece. "sparks fly as the two lights touch, " wonderful i loved it thank you so much for sharing your soul. this deserves many applauses
    Welcome to the site.
    Tory


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    How very beautiful....
    graceful pieces of Heaven flowing through every line of this...Beautiful and breathtaking...

    Lynda