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loosing you.......broke my heart

 

I remember the day, I was told that you would die
I kept on praying to god, Asking him  why?
how was I going to cope, you were more then a mother
A person Who loved me more, more  then any other
I cried so many tears, I dont know how to feel

I needed you around, this nightmare so very real
I love you in a way, I cant really explain
the things we shared between us, the happiness the pain
Mum I miss you so much, I dont know what to do
All the happiness I have had, is all because of you
I cry so many tears, because you are not there
Why god did you take her?, this is so unfair
mum please i want to be with you, but i know that can t be
for i would never let my children feel the pain like me
Mum I will never understand for you were my world
I may be grown up with my own family, but i will always be your little girl

I MISS YOU SO MUCH MUM......

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a poem written for my friends mother...... but i know if i lost my mum i could not cope as she is my world

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  • Clinging-to-Life
    July 11, 2007

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    So heartfelt and sincere! I liked this...though "mum" is suppose to be "mom", its all good. This was written well. Good job I'm sure your friend appreciates this muchly.


  • tawk gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    What a heartfelt write for your friend. I know that she will love it. I could feel the love and pain throughout.