my idea bulb
is long burnt out
it was a neon sign
burning bright
it said adult
but i smashed it with a rock
cause what it pointed to
wasn't very grown up
the next said girls girls girls
but it got me nowhere
and i didn't care for the selection
i had a neon star
under a neon moon
but that one didn't suit my life
of waking up at noon
i threw away my bud light
for a bud light light
and lighter and lighter
my head spun
now tequila's outa sight
i once had a fish
i don't really know why
it just sat there glowing
and kept on showing
that my neon ideas
arent right
so i'll just sit here in the dark
surrounded by all the glass
from my broken ways
and brighter days
in the dark you can never be led wrong
Author notes
i wanted something called my neon's burnt out, here it is
In a list
darkenning your future one bulb at a time
Comments
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i concurr
i agree with bay.. the last line rocks. so does the title..lol. very clever.. i like clever poetry. woot -
this was cool hun
especially the last line.
♥you -
I want to hear this in song...i keep wanting sing but i wont.
yeah i still have to go feed the damn thing every other night.....while the neon blinks out its message 24/7 burnt out neons on the sad side of town nice one.
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