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vision inspired
in the folds
of old albums cover

outlined transpired
cardboards molds
in the crease discovered

the picture silhouette
of a place forgotten
or not yet found
I found the lake
of old mistakes

heavenly
realization
awakes

fades away

In a list

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  • dustookie2 gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    Oh HH the things we hide inside old photo albums those keepsakes that mean little to anyone else....They are the things I sometimes wish i had...treasures lost by too many moves and lost boxes. nicely penned good luck in the contest.


  • countrybabe gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    Thanks for entering

  • countrybabe gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    Very Nice


  • countrybabe gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    Your PROMPT is: FADING SILHOUETTES Please do not call your poem this.
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