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Mighty Him

I saw him one day
I didn't know what to say
He was so mighty
I was so tiny

I tried to reach him
I tried almost everything
I tried to climb a mountain
People thought I was insane
I reached the top
But then he wass already on a higher mountain.
And yes, he was again on its top.

I tried to maka a change
Change to reach your height
But it was no use
I'm simply a horrible sight
I tried to catch his eye.
But how?
He's simply too high
or so it seemed
So now what to do?
Should I give up on him?

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by unnamed90

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  • sense surreal
    July 30, 2008
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    mighty him...i love how you use the word...there is a ceratin humor

    this isn't a nice situation
    feeling so little
    trying to reach out to him

    mmm ang mga cannot be reach hehe

    hope he'll stoop down a li'l so he could notice you
    or maybe he's too damn enjoying his mightiness