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Heavenly Sight~

Spirit winks
through prism
light, now
inviting
daydreams
Heavenly sight~

 

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Prompt: Crystal
10/10/10

A contest entry

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  • individuality gold member
    April 10

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    and the spirit soars across heavenly light, flutters of smiles catching the colours and there is a spectacular display. a good poem.


  • penman gold member
    August 8, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done. A great take on the prompt.


  • superstition
    July 17, 2007

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    Jeez, I can almost see these words in photograph form they're painted so vividly. I just got done watching Bob Ross paint a beautiful work of art on tv, so my mind is now geared toward the paints! A wonderful piece to read after watching his show...it compliments very well. You're really good at these shorter poems. They're so hard for me! lol.


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    Prettiful penning, Poet. Good luck in Timothy's contest, my Friend. Wanda


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    Thanks again for the entry, nice work!


  • Desire gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    Magnificent!!

    There You are
    Love this one busy bee
    Woooo Hoooooo
    especially that spirit winks
    inviting daydreams~~

    Love it!!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • countrybabe gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    Beautiful

  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    Nice,
    A good take on the given prompt!
    Thanks for your entry,
    And best of luck to ya!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    Prompt: Crystal

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