This world of our sucks, its slowly falling apart
Iam just a teenager, I didnt have a hope from the start
the drugs the pain the horror, its all part of life
How can we grow up normal, with all the wars we fight
I wanted to leave this world, go to a better place
Its not just one culture its all the different races
I hate it with a passion, why cant people see
I want to be a normal teenager, roam the streets free
well why should I bother, trying to change this world
Iam only one person, a scared teenage girl.
Well fuck all this shit, I can t stand the horror
We should all join togeather start a fresh tomorrow
So to all you drug addicts pedophiles out there
I hope you all rott in hell, for no one will ever care
Get rid of these monsters try and change this world
For If we live in harmony I will be a normal teenage girl....
Author notes
gigilo... trace3grls
A contest entry
- Life Sucks (rounds contest) by SoftlyScreaming.
600 points, ended July 12, 2007, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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this has a true message.
"I hate it with a passion, why cant people see
I want to be a normal teenager, roam the streets free
well why should I bother, trying to change this world
Iam only one person, a scared teenage girl."
a suggestion I have would be to spell-check. -
Growing up today in our awful and dangerous world must be really scary. I know that I fear for my older sons and my baby daughter Jasmine. You have expressed these feeling so well. Great write
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i liked it... what i didnt like was the rhyming, it didnt flow together.. i mean, it doesnt seem forced, it just seems like you couldve made the senteces shorter and still make it rhyme.. you did a good job overall though, and i did like the meaning
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