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My Verse for Poets in book 1

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angelica
Australia

A vision of a dream unfolds
as pen to paper I write
a poem to grace our book
much beauty to behold
how blest I am to have this chance
to be with Poet’s renown
heart is pumping wildly
as through the book I glance.

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  • ceegeeess
    September 27, 2007
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    unique indeed!

    how blest I am to have this chance
    to be with Poet’s renown
    heart is pumping wildly
    as through the book I glance" It is a unique foreword to such a great book! You did well in your poem simple ,but commendable,dear Joan


  • ceegeeess
    September 27, 2007

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    unique indeed!

    how blest I am to have this chance
    to be with Poet’s renown
    heart is pumping wildly
    as through the book I glance" It is a unique foreword to such a great book! You did well in your poem simple ,but commendable,dear Joan


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!!  This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!!


  • intanglio2ring
    August 14, 2007
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    Glad you did well!

    Mine was DQ'd
    Tang


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 14, 2007

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    what beautiful and welcomed words for our tapestry. yes, i think everyone in this book feels blessed, i know i do be well and be blessed


  • tawk gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    Such a lovely write so full of wonderful imagery and emotions. Amazing write


  • poetryality silver member
    July 28, 2007

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    I love everything about this entry, and the fact that I too am in this book with some of the world's most renowned poets. Those poets fill these pages daily, and for sure my dear angelica, you are at the top of the list. Your verse adds the sparkle that we need. I can't wait to read the pages of our book. This is something you know I've wanted since I first set foot on this site, exactly four years ago. I had an anniversary yesterday, and let it slip by. LOL That's my CRS working in overdrive. LOL

    I wish you well in the challenge my sister/friend.


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    July 15, 2007

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    Is it Poet's renown or Poets renowned? Or is it, "Ima shut your big trap!"

    So you get to be in a book or something?

    I like how the poem is both about the photo and your own anticipation.


    • angelica silver member
      July 15, 2007
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      HMMMM I'll ask Jan about the renown coz she may have already altered it. And YES it's for our 1st Allpoetry book of poems started by Kevin. 150 poets, but this is not the poem, this is a verse from each poet to make it the longest poem from poets all over the world. My poem I entered is "The gift of love"


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 11, 2007
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    Thanks Joan. This is lovely.


  • fleur de lys
    July 11, 2007

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    Dearest Aunty Joan

    Your picture is just lovely and your poem is an exceptional piece. I really love it and enjoyed every word. A great write. Best wishes for the contest.

    Hugs and love,
    Petratani

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