refreshing
as lavoris peppermint
-therapeutic-
as Lavender scents
palms of aloe vera
with Swiss secrets~
-gently-
surfacing s l o w l y
stroking,
tracing smiles and easing
tensions off your face
in swirls~ ~ ~
upon -silken- flesh
-warmth-
comfort
with olive sensations~
leaving thoughts -tranquil-
sowing scents
of lasting memories
-unconditionally-
caressing,
messaging those
stiff back, arm, and leg muscles
rubbing oil from the elbow up
through piano fingertips
from head to toe
with a hint of baby fresh
and a strong dose of
-musical- love
leaving the mind, body, and heart
relaxed
A contest entry
- MASSAGE ME! by Jeremy0826.
750 points, ended July 23, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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What a wonderful and relaxing piece
you have written here. I really
enjoyed reading this and thank you
for your entry in my contest! I
appreciate it and wish you the best
of luck with it here!
Jeremy0826 -
being as i am a lmt in the making...im not sure the sexual undertones in this were a fav of mine. i know its hard to approach massage without the obvious intimacy of it coming up...so i dont know. mayhaps it is me reading too much into it..i dont know. but, interesting contest. good luck.
blu
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oop, i didn't intend it to be sexual. i'll fix it. thanks
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such a relaxing piece. i could almost feel the scene unravel. this was a great piece my dear one.I appreciate your sharing this with me, now i will sit back and say ahhhhhh....
Love ya girl
Tory
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awsome write.sounds extremly relaxing....could do with one of those. then perhpas i could sleep lol. very well written wel done and good luck
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Wish my turkish bath had felt like that, ehh!! Where can I get one like this, sounds nice, good slant on the rubbing effect.
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