SilverNight
And each thought that you shall see
Was felt or know by all
In hidden dreams or wandered thought
Or in the truth of life
But what we write is what we know
And everything we want to show
Author notes
Sorry if it's not that good.
A contest entry
- Add a verse. for Tapestry of poets world record attempt by Janice M Pickett.
360 points, ended August 17, 2007, 144 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!! Well said!!!!!
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Glad you did well!
Mine was DQ'd
Tang
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Glad you did well!
Mine was DQ'd
Tang
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yes i do agree that if we write it that many others have thought or experienced it and sometimes it's those who are struggling that find answers in our penned words.
wonderful addition to the tapestry. be well and be blessed
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*nods* I have no idea what you have to do for the contest, but I still like this quite a bit. Dreamlike.
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Well, it's a group poem thing. We are having all 150 poets from the poets in book one only group, write a verse for the poem so we can turn it into a very very long poem and this is one of the verses.
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It's just fine. I did edit it a little though. used and instead of but in the second last line. adn mad the and in the last line with a small a. Thanks for joining in.
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