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Jumping Jerboa

 

Leaps over forests of fresh bloomed flowers,

tumbles softened by dewy petals,

belly up on the cushy grass.

 

Games played through freshly plowed fields,

in spicy tang of disturbed earth. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

The word made me think of jumping.
Image by Vasilisa at deviantart.com

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  • pithyaplomb
    July 11, 2007
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    unique, to say the least!


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    July 10, 2007

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    I thought this was amazing. I covered the pic to just take in your words. It was extremely visual and tactile. LOVED it!!! loved your interpretation of the prompt


  • GoddessNephthys
    July 10, 2007

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    very cute. i really love the pic you chose toput up with this. great job much love and good luck

  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    July 10, 2007

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    Nice one You are very creative! lol it tossed me!
    Good luck with this poetic masterpiece