Tonight she sleeps so sweet and tender
Tomorrow she will bloom in splendor.
She is the Sun-God's timeless lover
The golden shower called Sunflower.
It is to sparkle her love-filled eyes
That from the depths of seas come sunrise,
It is to brace her that every ray
Dares to journey light years each day.
The sensual kiss of morning sunlight
Wipes off tearful dew drops of night,
She blossoms to a golden wonder,
The angels keep off rain and thunder.
The Sun-God rises to heavens above
Fueled by thoughts of his only true love,
The Sunflower smiles in golden glory,
The angels bless their sweet love story.
Author notes
Entry for a contest "Have a look".
Option 5: Write me a poem about a flower. What does the flower you chose symbolize?
A contest entry
- Have a look by celestial.
300 points, ended July 29, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vegetal Personifications- Trees, Plants, Flowers, Etc. by Mercury Rising.
800 points, ended July 21, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Nature (Contest) by misticmoonlite.
625 points, ended August 25, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it. It made me feel as though I was reading about an enchanted place. Great write.
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VERY PRETTY
I love nature the flowers,what God created for us to share, you penned this with great imingery force,thanks for entering our contest,SH
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I like the intertwining of God, angels, and divine beauty and nature. Well-written & carries a beautiful message. Blue
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A very well-crafted and lovely poem with a wonderful flow and rhytmn and excellent rhyming. This poem also has both an emotional and spiritual quality to it, and was a pleasure to read. Best of luck in our contest, and thanks for entering.
David
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I so love Sun flowers they are so beautiful too me. I will look at them in a whole new light after reading your wonderful write. Amazing imagery
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This was beautiful! I was drawn in by the 1st stanza. This was a wonderful depiction and and displayed no more beautiful then nature can be. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my poem!
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Beautiful
This poem is very well-written -
A great beautiful poem. A great rhymed and flows nicely.
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