White knights in shining armor,
White knights with shining steel swords,
Heroic knights with noble steeds and lances long and straight;
The evil dragon with fatal claws and wicked teeth,
The fair maiden wandering in the woods,
Caught by the evil dragon;
From the castle the champion of all knights,
With his shining sword he strikes
True and does not falter;
And where many had died the champion and three comrades
Were the only ones fit go to the dragons lair.
Through many dangers the champion walked,
He and his compainions were the best of the best,
Then to the dragon lair they came.
Where many men would fight for themselves,
The four used their wits and their swords to help each other,
At long last friendship prevailed and the dragon was slain!
Then from the smoke only two walked,
The maiden and the champion,
The other noble three had entered the cave,
To never come out again.
Author notes
I like medieval stuff and a bit of fantasy here and there never hurt anyone. (I love fantasy) so here is my poem and I hope you like it. (this is my first poem)
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A contest entry
- Make Me Love You [show me your best] by thelovesongwriter.
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Please tell me what you think
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brilliant
full of medieval joy, very well written, congratulations on the bronze (we have something in common, i once won a bronze in a knights contest too)
well done, best wishes tony yates -
hehehe cool! kinda sad that his comrades died but hey not like they didnt expect it from fighting a dragon and all Awesome write still, and you won a bronze trophie on your first poem! wow nice ^_^ well keep writing and i hope you have fun reading all my comments as much fun as i have had leaving all of them and reading your poems as well ^_^ keep em coming dude their awesome!
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That was awesome!!!!!!!!! A great poem about knights and dragons. After the loss of his comrades, he goes on to save the fair maiden! Keep up the good work!
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I very much enjoy medieval times, stories, fantasies, etc and you wrote this quite well!
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest -
I enjoy reading medieval poetry and the stories they tell.
You did a great job!
Thank you for entering and Good Luck!
debbie
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wonderful narrative poem, i enjoyed reading this. best of luck &thanks for entering
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Welcome to allpoetry
Cool adventure. A classic tale of champions and dragons and maids to save the day. Nice flow and structure.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy -
Ooooh terrific, well done, bravo, intelligiantly written, ok i better stop before i brake a brain cell, anyway nice poem! i am usually not into freewrite but this poem was very good and i can honestly say it was better than most freewrite, well keep writing and i'll keep reading, ttfn
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Good fantasy poem. Very enjoyable and interesting. Keep up the good work and best of luck in the contest.
Luv,
Candy
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ok thanks im glad you like it
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