Pressure points, are what I seek
Hands rubbing vigorously, to increase the heat
Handsome man, full of life’s tension
As he enters the shop, his tight shoulders caught my attention
A tense smile, darkening his face
I smile lightly, as I lead him to another place
A room for him to strip, a towel to wrap around
He appears moment, another tension spot was found
His head he holds tightly, as leans on the table
Hand to back, he would of climbed on, but wasn’t able
My hands heated, I reach to his neck
Thumbs kneading that special spot, as he gently leaned back
Circular motions, my palms dig deep
Upon weary muscles, I apply heat
Around, around, my hands go
From high top, to down below
Tension beginning to release
A soft breath escapes, as I massage with ease
Now a little lighter, he lays across the table
A smile comes across his face, as now he’s able
Heated oil, rubbed into my hands
Upon his flesh, of needed demand
I message the temples, to his neck and spine
Vigorously heating, all places I find
As I rubbed, kneaded, and pushed
I massaged on down, to right above a toweled tush
We speak in between oil changes
As I dried off, reapplied, and hit another tension range
He spoke of many days of pain he had
Until today, when it all got too bad
Now my fingers, travel their own path
Tingling new sensations, up and down his back
A few chop, chops to the tight areas
He began laughing, in a wide hysteria
As he got up and his towel fell
Who was more embarassed, neither he or I could tell
But I must say he must be well, for he took off real fast
My face beat red, as I stifled a laugh
Author notes
Hope this finds some comfort in your ol broke down body lol. Best wishes on many entries.
A contest entry
- MASSAGE ME! by Jeremy0826.
750 points, ended July 23, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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An enjoyable read, this made me LOL. Good Luck in the contest. onesugar
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LOL! This is such a great piece.
I love the imagery and humor in
this one. Sounds like a wonderful
time there! Thank you for your entry
here and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826 -
i liked the massage of this poem.. oil changes reminded me of a car when i was reading it.
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