feathered
wings flutter by
like a butterfly angel
and light upon daffodil dreams
but I
like a cragilly old crocus bulb
am still buried in dirt
too shallow to
take root
A contest entry
- Butterfly Cinquains by azure85.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I, also like the opposites, works so well in this, plus the imagery is so great and the poem is so eloquent, good luck in the contest, beautiful butterfly cinquain, here!
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Oh, I like the compare and contrast throughout the two portions of your butterfly cinquain. The pretty butterfly, and the bulb. This is great, thank you so much for your entry.
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love the portrayal of oppostites. lovely form as always.
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