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The cycle

Everything is a state of mind,

searching for lifes purpose?

theres nothing to find.

Dont be loving,

for in return you get nothing.

Theres no friends,

no foes.

No pot of gold,

at the end of the rainbow.

Dont hope,

dont dream,

for you'll just end up asking,

what does it all mean?

Please tell me what you think

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  • Sle3p
    July 10, 2007

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    Some truth is spoken this is a wonderful peice! You should write more like this i realy like it. It made me think a lot.

    -maddie


    • comedy and tragedy
      July 10, 2007
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      Thanks, I normally dont write anything like this, unless Im lonely. But I'll put more effort into other pieces.