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High School Love


Love is true and, "oh", so kind.   
The in-depth feeling, so divine.   
Love scribbled on the back of a     
notebook.                         
Posted pictures of your truest     
in your locker.                   
Holding hands going down the stairs.
One big kiss, if we dare,         
before you drop me off at my class.
Love,                             
High school love.                 

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  • grannyeri gold member
    July 24, 2007

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    Think we can all relate to this,, that feeling one has when they first become attached to someone - not sure if it is love, but sure feels funny for the first time - twitterpated is what we used to call it back then...in the good old days. LOL Cute write.


  • IronIcecream
    July 13, 2007

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    I don't know what you might add - being a mummy high school love is something far behind me. Now I chase bats on the corridors of my pyramid and watch the cobwebs multiply.
    I'd remove those XOXO's though